Chapter 15 – Apart: 16

Chapter 15 – Apart - Page 16

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  • birdsofshore

    Oh no! Elan got disturbed too soon! Was there a chance for him to speak, or will it be just a blank message?

    • themice

      You’ll find out. :)

      • poppyroc

        bbbbbuuut we wanna know nowwww!! *throws fit* ima pout til i get my way!

        • themice

          There is a gift next Weds for your pouting.

          • poppyroc

            OOOooo a gift!! This is the first time a comic’s creator has replied to one of my comments. :]

          • themice

            Really? haha. I love love love interacting with readers. My replies are usually longer than the first comment!

          • poppyroc

            Oh you know what, that’s not quite true. Alex Woolfson replied to me once. All the same, it’s really nice to interact with the comic’s creator, something that I love about online comics. :) I always feel frustrated on comics that don’t have a comments section!!

          • themice

            I imagine that Alex Woolfson is pretty busy too.

            For a long time I got no comments and a lot of spam. So I closed up old page comments for a while but recently opened them up again.

  • taurussieben

    Oh shoot… Yeah, already back my a** … *sighs and waits for next wednesday*

    Thanks again :3

    • themice

      He’s a fast old man! ;) And he wants to keep his job.

      • taurussieben

        They will outsmart him *chakaaaaaa* o/

  • CarolaFunder

    As I started reading this comic like three days ago or so, I’m still around. Your story is really wonderful, and I can’t predict it. Which is good.

    Your art seems to have omproved greatly compared with the first chapters, not saying the first was good, you just seem s alot more confident. And I very much apprecite is handdrawn style and just a little bit of digital shades. (I assume they’re digital and not aquarelle?)
    And like others have mentioned the not-manga style is very refreshing.

    Besides Rafa looks utterly handsome in this page. That beard adds some neat manliness. Also shows in the visuals how he kind of have matured psychologically. And Elan got a haircut ?

    And again I love very much your sense of humour.

    • themice

      I’m glad you stuck it out! It is a long read, with a bit to go.

      I don’t look at the first chapters anymore because the art kills me a little. I’ve had discussions with other webcomic artists and the consensus is to look forward, not backwards, and continue with the story and only redraw if you plan to publish. Though that was the intended effect, to GET better!

      Someone described Rafa as a boy in a man’s body, and the beard makes him all man. We’ll see if he continues to keep it! Elan, indeed, got a haircut and new glasses. It does signify the lack of control he has over his life right now, though he may also keep it short since the curls bother him. They are not the same people as the beginning of the story.

      • D. Garrett

        i actually prefer to see artists grow and improve. i hope u dont change a thing ever. and i also appreciate that just like real life, ur characters arent stagnant. and their appearance reflects that.

        • I ended up publishing the first chapters as is, not redrawing everything. The art is usually the only criticism it gets. I did fix the grammatical and punctuation errors for the book versions! :)

          • D. Garrett

            yay! im glad.

  • CarolaFunder

    Sorry, I see I’ve expressed wrongly in my comment before. I ofcourse ment: ‘Your art seems to have improved greatly compared with the first chapters, not saying it isn’t good, —‘ I hope you don’t misunderstand it :-)

    • themice

      Haha, didn’t even catch that I read so fast. :P No problem, glad you don’t think so!

  • lks

    *clenches fists*

  • Thespian-Rex

    I haven’t commented yet because I’ve been tangled up in reading this lovely story! But let me just say, your art is fantastic, your storyline and dialogue are wonderful, and your taste in music is divine (I love Frou Frou!!). Thanks so much for such a great read! :)

    • themice

      Aw, thank you! Lovely comment. :)

  • loveispainpleasure

    Wow. Even disheveled and miserable, Rafa looks. Damn. Hot.

  • Ninhursag

    Yes, thank you for showing us more of that smexy Rafa ^^

  • Ninhursag

    Yay, Frou Frou, Let go from them is one of my favorite songs ^^