Comments on: Chapter 22 – First Contact: Page 10

By: Dokidokibaka

Dokidokibaka — Thu, 23 Oct 2014 05:32:00 +0000

Rafa looks a little rough around the edges. Has he been getting enough sleep since he found out that Elan was back in the area again?

Ms Mouse looks comfortable hanging out under the bench, though she looks like she might want to climb up Rafa’s leg and comfort him. ^_^

By: Dokidokibaka

Dokidokibaka — Thu, 23 Oct 2014 04:08:00 +0000

This is a really great song. ^_^

By: Aziza Johnson

Aziza Johnson — Thu, 16 Oct 2014 20:46:00 +0000

Funny you say that O- Scraggly one! LOL

By: Donald Burch

Donald Burch — Fri, 10 Oct 2014 13:34:00 +0000

I see the Governor as an opportunist. If Arthur Singer’s money made its way into the Governor’s hands with instructions to make Elan suffer I honestly believe the Governor might give pause. He seems to like Elan but in the end business is business. If not the Governor then Jake seems the obvious candidate to carry out Arthur Singer’s mission of vengeance.

Arthur had Elan watched extensively so it is very likely that he knows about Jake. Arthur might see a convenient toady in Jake and later, a scapegoat. Arthur can arrange for Jake to get money with instructions to make Elan suffer. He can then sit back with popcorn and watch the show confident that none of it can be traced back to him – or so he might think. There are so many ways this can unfold that I don’t mind sharing my pet theories. I know Mouse will surprise me.

By: I AM R U

I AM R U — Fri, 10 Oct 2014 11:07:00 +0000

See, I can imagine him (Rafa) saying that when Elan is there as well, just to see Elan jump to their defense and give him an impassioned spiel about how the birds are beautiful, and Rafa just smiling because he loves how Elan looks when he’s all worked up and passionate about something… Ah, I miss those two together…