Comments on: Chapter 18 – Jake’s Payback: Page 17

By: Jonni

Jonni — Sun, 08 Mar 2015 16:52:00 +0000

Rafa is not likable, he’s adorable.

By: themice

themice — Sat, 15 Feb 2014 17:59:00 +0000

Yes, most of the time I relate more to Rafa…so often I worry if he is a likeable character!!

By: I AM R U

I AM R U — Fri, 14 Feb 2014 08:16:00 +0000

Ok! So I was up to here last time…

Poor Rafa… Feel so sorry for him… Interestingly enough, rereading the past few pages, I’ve realised that its Rafa I feel for/relate to more than Elan. I care about Elan, but mostly because he means so much to Rafa… Perhaps because Rafa reminds me quiet a bit of my own partner (and I must admit, I share some traits with Elan) and my need to protect my partner makes me worried about Rafa… Irrelevant to the story, but what I’ve been thinking…

ANYWAY!!! GAH! Who broke Rafa’s window???

By: themice

themice — Tue, 07 Jan 2014 19:22:00 +0000

I think that is how Elan always saw it. One of the things that attracts him to Rafa is that Rafa is a builder and a repairer. He MAKES things, versus what Elan does (just does a lot thinking). He found those as a symbol of what he thinks is great about Rafa.

Rafa might all see it differently.

By: NatureFantasy

NatureFantasy — Tue, 07 Jan 2014 10:16:00 +0000

But a hammer and saw are tools that can be used to repair things just as much as too destroy them, so it is also a symbol that like the car, their relationship can be repaired, right? I also see the tools as a symbol of hope.