Chapter Break 6

Chapter Break 6
Rafa at 14
In two years he would reach almost his full height (taller and stronger than his feared older brothers) and become a formidable force in the neighborhood. But until then he was just a scrawny kid learning to fight.

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  • Lleyn

    Ohhhh, sweet! Hah, aside from the bruises, Rafa looks like any other kid at 14. Love the mohawk!

    • themice

      I had bruises! But a bit younger when I did. :)

  • DayiaKnyte

    I came across the link for your comic last week and proceeded to read the entire story in one sitting. I am now hooked and can’t wait to see how the story develops.
    I have read other gay themed comics I have enjoyed; but this is the first time I have read something I would like to see portrayed by real actors. I think all your characters would translate well on stage or as a mini series.
    I am not sure why you were concerned with the artistic style as I think it gives it a warmth and intimacy to the story that standard comic art would not allow.
    Keep up the good work, in both your art and writing!

    • themice

      I often have fun thinking who would play them in a movie, or short film, or series. I’ve seen many models with the right face, or body shape, but hair never matches! Because Rafa’s hair is rare for a Latino, and Elan’s is rare for a known model/actor.

      I too often compare my work to other webcomic artists, even though their style isn’t something I would do. Just my nature — never satisfied!

      Thank you!

      • loveispainpleasure

        oh the wonders of hair dye…lol jk i know what you meant.

    • Red

      I think exactly like you do.

  • SVM2015

    Yay! The mohawk drawing! :)

  • Red

    He is so cute!

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  • Ninhursag

    Yay, finally, a drawing of Rafa when he had a mohawk, you said you wanted to draw it so many chapters ago.

  • Akira Gımıe A Fıght

    i think this would be an exelent book to as well as a movie :)