Chapter 7 – The Corner Hole: Page 20

Chapter 7 – The Corner Hole - Page 20

Fabrizio Paterlini – Primi Passi

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  • Sassafrassery

    I just have to say, I love everything about this page, the detail, the music, Rafa’s writing, everything is just so….so…GAHHH. <3 I only started reading this a few hours ago and I'm already in love with it, from the story to the characters to your lovely, lovely art. Just… ugh <3

  • lks

    Is it me, or has Rafa’s handwriting changed? Not sure if this was on purpose or not, because he’s angrier now, but it seems a little more angry- long, spiky strokes (though that may just be me conferring meaning somewhere it isn’t)

    • themice

      It did. I couldn’t find the original font so I went with something similar. :{

    • Another thing fixed in the book version now.

      It is slow but I’m reading all the comment edits/suggestions.

  • Sassafrassery

    I cannot begin to put into words how much I love the pages where Elan is playing the piano. :)

  • Jonni

    I was just listening to the music and looking at Rafa watching Elan play, it was all so beautiful there were tears rolling down my face. I love how the awkwardness and defensiveness has gone from Elan as he loses himself in the music. Its like he has rediscovered something special.

    • Ninhursag

      Very well put, I noticed it as well, the defensivness is gone and Elan is now focused solely on the music.

      • Jonni

        Thanks. I think that in Elan’s mind, he is flying.

  • D. Garrett

    omg i loved the piano piece u selected for this scene! it was a perfect match for elans situation and the emotions i imagine him having regarding playing music again after so long. since u have added a beautiful piece to my collection, id like to return the fav if poss. one of my fav.s:

    Ludovico Einaudi – Nuvole Bianchi Youtube i like the one by dureiable.

  • Ninhursag

    I love the illustration, the notes on the diary and the song <3 The song fits so well this moment.