Chapter 2: Queenie’s – Page 13

Chapter 2 - Queenie's - Page 13

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  • wow…the dialog style of your characters is really…different from anything i’ve seen before…like they speak in language that is obviously English but their actual phrasing of things is not like any speech patterns i’ve encountered…not sure how else to describe/articulate it…just noticing that the conversational style is unique, i guess.

    • ChristineInCanada

      It sounds like it’s spoken by people who speak English as a second language. They’re perfectly understandable, but their syntax is a little unusual.

  • Ms. Mouse’s butt is in the door way. The cat’s face looks so sad in that second panel. “Darn it, :-( thwarted again! :-(” “One day….Mouse, One day…..”

  • lks

    WOOP. rafa defending elan right from the start. [or maybe he’s just a little argumentative..]