Chapter 23 – Scott & Hudson: Page 13

Chapter 23 - Page 13

Greg Laswell – I’d Be Lying

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  • >/////< A chaste kiss on the lips!

  • kuku

    Oh Scott, and such a tender look. Scott, you are fabulous. And you deserve someone who’s not in love with someone else.

    • Red


  • PomixWing



    That was close. Almost shipped them.

    Be still my beating heart.

  • Lleyn

    Sound advice, Scott. The question is, does Elan know that he deserves to be loved? And that last picture of Elan is adorable and funny in equal measures.

  • Roxabel Victoria Pérez Egaña

    Noooooooooooooo Scott what did you do! why so nice and cool and stuff! </3 I'm crying in confusion. This is so cool and so not cool in many ways in my head x_x

    • kuku

      I think it’s more like “Rafa if he keeps treating you like he used to treat you, if he seems like he can’t be bothered with you in public, if he makes you feel unsure of yourself, is less than you deserve,” but I think Scott knows Rafa is really broken up over Elan and that things might be different now.

      • Roxabel Victoria Pérez Egaña

        Then why does he talk about “other people”?

        • kuku

          I think he meant, “If Rafa treats you bad, there are other people who would treat you better”, but it’s still “if” – he didn’t say “Rafa won’t treat you right so go find someone else.” He’s leaving it open.

          Are you rereading while you wait for new pages? : )

  • JesBelle

    I feel awful and cynical even saying this, but — Please, be as awesome as you seem Scott. It will break my heart if you are not.

  • Red

    OH my! I knew it! That face though… Elan I love your face…

  • Aziza Johnson

    Can’t blame Scott for tryin’ Nice guys don’t finish last tho… But Elan is surely hooked on that scruffy hombre who’s scared of his mama (and rightfully so)! Now does Elan realize that fact yet is the question?

  • I AM R U

    Go. Away. Scott. >:c

  • tailess

    I can’t believe it’s been over a year since I’ve seen these dorks. Elan, rafa is a big butt

  • IronDog

    Poor Scott. As decent as he is, even he can’t fight feelings of emotional superiority. I really like how humanly you’ve written everyone in this story x