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  • Elan is still having problems. :( But he is working on dealing with them. :) ……George! *big hugs*

  • kuku

    Oh George, George as source of comfort, bless you. And Elan seeing their kinship. He really is a remarkable person. So sorry he is indeed still having the horrible flashbacks.

  • Donald Burch

    Very nice depiction of what triggers flashbacks and how it feels. As one who wrestles with it I appreciate how Mice goes to such care to show it accurately. It means a lot to me, thank you. Moving on to the story.

    I like how George is there for Elan. They both struggle with flashbacks and George is there as a voice of reason and comfort. This strikes me as profoundly cool and I appreciate how George freely helps Elan. Good souls are indeed everywhere if one only looks.

  • Jonni

    themice, typo alert. I think Elan’s second speech bubble should read “My vision goes blurry”. I know I’m pedantic, but in my defence I only spotted it on my third read-through. The first two times I was too busy admiring your gorgeous artwork to notice :)

    • themice

      Have to try to remember to fix it in both places (original and here).

  • bronakopdin

    oh good lord, poor Elan, I wanna hug him so hard! Thanks George for cheering him up!