Chapter 20 – Father and Son: Page 5

Chapter 20 - Father and Son - Page 5

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  • OH NOES!!!!!!!

    Poor Javier!!!

    Is it bad of me that my first thought was Elan’s dad, because of that conversation Elan had with his dad about going back to that area to teach?

    And then my second thought was it might be Jake taking his frustrations about Rafa leaving him on the closest link to Elan he could find.

    :-(

    • Roxabel Victoria Pérez Egaña

      M… I had the thought that maybe someone mistook Javier for some other dude because of his looks. I remember when Rafa said he was too big for a teenager… :( I really hope he gets better…

  • SmokedBoo

    I have been waiting anxiously for this update. You’ve just no idea.

  • ZHODY

    Tutoring? When did that happen?

  • D. Garrett

    my first thought is that people elan cares for are being targeted by the local gang. perhaps to provide incentive for elan to provide money for their being left alone. i think rafa’s car window, and the kid being jumped are related and due to elans paying for jake.

    • I used it as a mechanism to imprint on Rafa how much violence he really lives in and how much it affects everyone he knows. It affects his later decision.

      • D. Garrett

        oh. that makes sense and is a much simpler explanation. oddly enough after typing my thoughts about this page i had a dream of being in a situation myself where this was the truth. im dreaming ur webcomic, themice. what have u done to me??? but i will still cont. to read it. i guess the dream/nightmare is because i have truly been immersed in it since i discovered it. its excellent work.