Chapter 18 – Jake’s Payback: Page 9

Chapter 18 - Jake's Payback - Page 9

The Promise – Tracy Chapman

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  • Awwwwwww!!!! Elan I love you sweetie pie!!! I think you are better than oatmeal love!

    And seriously, themice, the music with that journal entry is making me tear up. So wonderful. I love you.

    • Maria C. Cezar Garcia

      his. hair.

      let’s hug him and never let him get hurt again ;___;

    • themice

      He always pulls himself together eventually.

  • dominoKEI

    I read the entire comic in a night, last wednesday

    and this is my first comment. I am so in love with your characters and your art. This story took me on a rollercoaster, and I re-read it twice. Thank you so much for this gift. Your art is certainly a gift.

    Elan and Rafa are my new favourites.

    • themice

      Thank you for commenting and enjoying the story. I love hearing from readers! <3

  • RD

    Someone bought something at Tiffany’s New York. Something totalling $6859.13. According to what I could make out of the product code and what the internet tells me, someone bought a diamond ring. Slender gold band, row of diamonds. (Yes I went to the effort of looking it up. Couldn’t let that sit there…)

    • themice

      LOL, I thought I faded that info better. Rest assured it wasn’t me, probably Elan’s father expensive spending habits.

      • SVM2015

        Would not be surprised in the least if it was Elan’s dad.

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  • SVM2015

    I also thought of Doing My Thing by Spartha Swa. It could fit Elan as he is stepping towards a new direction but it could also work with Rafa as he has to reconsider his relationship with Jake. It’s such a good song. –

    • themice

      OH I love her! I really need to get my reader music suggestion page up. I bet there is so much more out there I don’t know.

      • SVM2015

        That would be awesome. I’m curious about what people think of when they read each scene. :)

        • themice

          I just have to figure out the best way to do it… hymmmmmm.

          • SVM2015

            Forum? Or maybe a comments section devoted to fans?

          • themice

            not sure I have the traffic for a forum, maybe a comment page?

          • SVM2015

            Maybe you could devote a section of the Sundry page to soundtrack suggestions since you have the songs listed there. I don’t know if Disqus takes hashtags but it may be a good place to start.


    MY HEAD!

  • kahltira

    I just reread this bit again…I tend to do that with this comic… and….it’s amazing…That song is perfect. You have brilliant taste.

  • Ninhursag

    I like the amount of detail you put in, seems like Elan writes his thoughts any time he has inspiration, hence he writes on any piece of material he has at hand. This time was a receipt.

  • IronDog

    I really like the way you draw Elan’s hair :3