Chapter 17 – The Decision: Page 2

Chapter 17 - The Decision - Page 2

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  • birdsofshore

    Oh, Rafa! I love the way you show that he feels it all so deeply.
    I couldn’t get the link for Ch17 page 1 to work… I’ll check back in a few days and hope to see it then perhaps?

    • themice

      Where is the bad link? I tried finding it but so far it all works on my end (which isn’t reliable).

      Rafa feels things deeply! He is very passionate.

      • birdsofshore

        It’s working for me, now, as well, in all the places that it didn’t! Perhaps it was just a blip.

        • themice

          Hym. I wonder about those unexplained blips!

  • Lleyn

    … That would be because he’s more or less a prisoner in his own home, Carlise.

    New site looks good! Also is loading way faster than the old one was.

    • themice

      I removed all unnecessary plugins. No twitter feeds, etc. That really helps with the user fast experience. ;)

  • Ghoulish Sekky

    Aw darn, I finished it :P

    • themice

      LOL, well there is a lot more but now it is every two weeks for you! :)

      • Ghoulish Sekky

        But.. But… I will die from waiting.

        *Dies*

  • Dokidokibaka

    Hmmmm, is that Elan’s journal he has with him?

    • themice

      Yes! :)

      • Dokidokibaka

        I hope I wasn’t the first or only one to spot that. Granted it might be a little easy to miss, but it also kind of stands out.

        Yay for me not making much sense!!!

        • themice

          I hope more people noticed it. Not integral to the story, but it is one of the little things I like to add.

          • D. Garrett

            i think its sweet that he is carrying around the journal. it seems so sentimental.

  • Cloesh

    Did Carlos try to make a smile with that bacon and eggs ? Or am i just imagining things ?

  • D. Garrett

    the more i read this the more im craving french fries!

  • IronDog

    This page seems to be refusing to load.

    • Try again. It seems to be loading just fine now.

    • There was a DoS attack almost everywhere yesterday, including Amazon where the images are held. I am surprised anything loaded!