Chapter 11 – Promise: Page 13

Chapter 11 – Promise - Page 13

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  • Tambra Galid

    Beautiful conclusion to this part of the story. Thanks for sharing this story and art.

  • Denita Brown

    Now that Elan is talking about being on a fire escape, why do I feel like he took The Guvnah offer and now he is a man-ho

  • Dakejev

    I’m sorry, but I have to say that I’ve never ever been in a city, not to mention a BIG city where you could see the Milky Way in the night sky. The brightest planets – Jupiter, Venus, Mars, Saturn – yes, if you can find a dark spot. If you can find a REALLY dark spot in the suburbs, then Ursa Major, yes, and Orion and Cassiopeia. But Ursa Minor and Polaris? No way. And something as faint as the glowing dust clouds of Milky Way? Not unless a power outage darkened the whole city.

    I’m an amateur astronomer in real life, and while it makes great poetry, without several hours’ drive out and back in, the city lights will keep them from seeing most of those things.